Incredible, Volume Leveling Could Use Work
To start, big congrats on getting out episode 2. I enjoyed it quite a bit. However, a large problem was volume levels. Many a times, for "noises," characters make, I had to turn to volume up so it was blasting in my ears in order to hear it, and I bearly could at some points even doing that. Further, in regards to voice over work, I feel as though if you're going to voice over some, voice it all. If you finish the episode, and realize there are points where the character would make a noise that you hadn't anticipated, inform your VAs, so they can send in the sound for you. You can send them the video so that they can synch up the noises (or just have them do it without the video). A lot of places left me a bit confused, because it seems like there should be a sound there, and it really bothered me. Khale was missing a huge number of sounds, which especially bothered me in the, "action scene" with his, brother I believe? It was great, but could have been a whole lot more had there been some "action" noises. Other places where noises were very noticibly missing were Khale in the beginning, "Inhales, etc." And the scene where Tilix steals the Legs. I feel like while you did decide to have it be an orchestrated scene, rather than one with noise, I personally think what was going on could have been much clearer had the shopkeeper, the buyer, Tilix, and Lar made the noises to correspond with what they were doing. Again, I love this, and I can't wait for the next episode. The Flash is amazing, and I can't wait for episode 3. Great job, and keep up the good work.
xD SEEDies. Nice.
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